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Essays that persuade

서류첨삭 · PERSONAL STATEMENT & ESSAY EDITING

Your essay, reviewed by someone who got in — to your subject, at your target university

Your essay, reviewed by someone who got in — to your subject, at your target university
Generic editing polishes your words. Our consultants do something fundamentally different. They know the intellectual depth, the structure, and the voice that admissions teams in your field are actually looking for, because they have been through that exact process themselves.

All our consultants are Cambridge, Harvard, or Oxford graduates — at professor level. They are personally trained by Marianne and matched to your specific subject and needs. A chemistry applicant works with a chemistry specialist. An engineering applicant works with an engineer. Subject expertise is not optional — it is the entire point.

A note on AI. Every consultant knows what a genuinely deserving essay looks like from the inside. That is something AI fundamentally cannot replicate (at least, yet). Please do not trust AI for your personal statement. Admissions teams know, and the stakes are too high.

대상 학생 - WHAT WE COVER

Applications we support

 Wherever your application requires a strong academic essay in English — we can help.

UCAS

UK Undergraduate personal statements

International

Singapore, Canada, Australia & beyond - tailored to the specific requirements of each course and institution

Oxbridge & Medicine

Specialist support for the higest-stakes applications

Graduate & master's

Statement of purpose & research proposals

패키지 - WHAT'S INCLUDED

We stay with you through the entire process

We don't do one-off edits - because they are pointless, for you and for us.
Our goal is the same as yours: a successful offer.

Initial consultation — with Marianne personally

 This first conversation is with Marianne herself — via Kakao Talk, call, or Zoom. She will want to explore your academic journey, your genuine interests and experiences, and make an honest assessment of your chances. There is no point proceeding if the application is unlikely to succeed - and we will tell you that honestly, with respect, before any commitment is made.

Document review & consultant confirmation -

Once you have spoken with Marianne, your matched subject-specialist consultant will carry out a thorough review of your existing draft or materials. They assess whether your application has a genuine chance of success. If the answer is yes, the project is confirmed and the detailed work begins.

Draft & deep feedback

Your consultant provides detailed, structured feedback — not just grammar and flow, but the
strength of your argument, the clarity of your academic identity, and whether the essay sounds
like you at your best. This is an active collaboration: documents go back and forth, and your input
is essential throughout. We bring the expertise; you bring the voice.

Unlimited revisions — until we're all happy

We do not cap the number of revisions for your core application. We work through as many rounds as it takes — because a truly compelling personal statement is refined, questioned, and polished, not produced in one pass.

Good to know: Unlimited revisions apply to your agreed core document. Completely new content - for example, a new essay for an additional university added later — is treated as a separate document. Our consultants will always recommend what they believe is the strongest version; if you prefer a different direction, we will explore it with you, but we cannot be held responsible for a final version that goes against our professional recommendation.

합격 결과 - RESULTS

Where our students have been accepted

Universities where students supported by 마이에듀프렙 I have received offers.
자주 묻는 질문 - FAQ

Common Questions

Will you write the essay for me?

No — and this matters. Admissions teams are highly skilled at identifying essays that don't sound like the applicant. Our role is to help your voice and your ideas come through as clearly and compellingly as possible. The experiences, the thinking, and the passion must be yours. We make sure they land.

How many rounds of editing are included?

Unlimited, for your core document. We do not stop until the essay is genuinely ready to submit - some students need three rounds, some need ten. That said, unlimited revisions apply to the agreed scope of work. Entirely new content added later - such as an essay for an additional university - is treated as a separate document. And if you wish to take the essay in a direction our consultant disagrees with professionally, we will try it with you, but we cannot be held responsible for the outcome.

What if I'm applying to multiple universities or countries?

Absolutely. Many of our students apply to universities across the UK, US, and other English-speaking countries simultaneously. We tailor our support to each application's specific requirements — UCAS has very different conventions from a US Common App or a graduate statement of purpose, and we know all of them.

How much does it cost?

Every student's needs are different, so our service is package-based and tailored accordingly. Please get in touch via Kakao Talk - we will explain exactly what is included before any commitment is made.

Tell us your subject and target universities

Marianne will be in touch personally to start the conversation — no pressure, no commitment required to begin.

Rest = Original SOP text = v1

Essay review

Essays that persuade

Your application writing must do more than sound correct. Marianne helps Korean students and families turn ideas and achievements into persuasive, memorable essays and statements for overseas admissions.

My essay finally felt like me—accepted to Brown.

Seoul applicant Undergraduate admissions

Marianne's comments helped my SoP become clear and confident.

Busan applicant Masters admissions

We saw the difference in both structure and impact.

Parent, Seoul Family Guidance

Difference

More than proofreading

This is not about grammar or spelling. Marianne works with you to strengthen your ideas, positioning, and story so your writing stands out with meaning and intent.

Undergraduate applicants

Students writing personal statements for university applications. Your essay should show who you are and why you belong at your chosen school.

Masters applicants

Masters preparing Statements of Purpose. Your SoP must articulate your research interests and academic direction with clarity and conviction.

PhD Applicants

PhDs preparing Statements of Purpose. Your SoP must articulate your research interests and academic direction with clarity and conviction.

Service

What Marianne helps improve

Many strong students struggle with the same writing challenges. These are the problems I see most often, and the ones I help fix.

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Structure and flow

Essays are reorganised so ideas build logically and each paragraph serves a clear purpose. The reader follows your thinking without effort.
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Clarity and focus

Vague language becomes precise. Tangents are removed. Every sentence earns its place, and your main message becomes unmissable.
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Stronger positioning

Your achievements and experiences are reframed to create a more compelling narrative. The essay shows not just what you did, but why it matters.
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Authentic voice

Your personality and perspective come through more clearly. The writing sounds like you, but better—more confident, more intentional, more memorable.

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What's included in your review

Every review includes detailed feedback on your document, strategic guidance for revision, tailored notes on structure and message, and direct support to make your writing more coherent, focused, and persuasive. You receive expert insight, not generic edits.